SINCLAIR LEWIS THORVALE FARM WILLIAMSTOWN, MASS. Wedn[esday] May 2 Darling, talking to Cedric on phone yesterday; he will have called you up. He said that Responsible had the best dialog he'd read in years (sic) and all it needed was some purely theatrical twists, I told him you w[oul]d be submitting it to Shumlin and Clurman; he urged me not to do so till changes made. Now I think we mite compromise; as Cedric says, not show it to Shumhin yet BUT, since Clurman is a good friend, show it to him, with understanding MS will be changed, and see if he has anything really constructive and helpful to say. Then, I might see him -- here or NY. Eh?